Who am I ?

Hello, today I made this called who am I? and you need to guess what I am please comment below what you think it is and please don't try purposely to copy others answers. we had to use onomatopoeia and etc. I enjoyed using these good strong vocabulary words to make it interesting well bye blog you later.

Draft: Who am I? 

Line 1; Onomatopoeia: Vhmmmm!

Line 2; 3 adjectives: loud, sharp and gigantic.

Line 3; 3 verbs: walking, talking and cutting.

Line 4; Simile: It is as loud as an eagle.

Line 5; Metaphor: He is an empty box.

Line 6; alliteration: he’s happy, helpful and hardworking.